Captain Ted – Story coming together

Well the story I have in mind for Captain Ted is finally starting to come together. I've been working on an outline, and finally came up with a "decent" story with a moral and all that. Hopefully it will be as entertaining as I intend...

I'm wanting to do this project 100% on my own, so don't be surprised if I don't take any critique advice; I'll probably actually not release any actual work until I've got something "done."

I will give you the basis for the story, if you're interested: Ted is a pilot in the Air Force, and is flying a standard procedure flight, when he accidentally goes out of communication range, and crash lands on an island in the Caribbean (or really any non-specific tropical island). Exploring the island, he discovers an alien who has also crash landed, and has a chimp with him, whom he rescued from a test rocket back in the 60s/70s. They all become friends, and set about trying to find a way to get home.